In a conversation about writers having the responsibility to be good role models - to make their characters moral paragons or at least have someone in the story who can point out what is morally right when the main character makes mistakes - I thought to myself that if writers could ONLY write things that promoted the morally right way to handle things, that could make for some boring books.
Besides, whose definition of morally right would all writers be bound to?
Anyway, a situation was thrown out that some people think that it's wrong to shoot intruders, but that others think that it's okay. I will admit that if I had a gun AND I was certain that someone was on my property to harm me or my children, I would use the gun. I can't be sure if I would actually hit the bad guy or if he/she would live or die, and that's not important here.
What is important is that it was suggested that not shooting an intruder is the morally right thing to do, and that writers have the responsibility to portray that, especially if it's aimed at young adults - basically anyone under 18.
I wrote this, and I liked the way it turned out so much that I decided to post it to my blog in case I ever want to turn it into a full story :-)
Taking as an example the person who shoots someone who came onto their
property. I imagine that it could be written the morally right way:
"I
heard a noise and knew that I was not alone. It couldn't possibly be my
parents because they were out of town for the week. I held my breath so
the intruder couldn't hear me and pulled out my cellphone so that I
could call 911. I have no way to defend myself - other than the gun in
my father's dresser - so I should go hide in my closet until they
arrive. Oh no! He's found me! Somebody help!
Cut to next scene: And
in tonight's top news, a local teen was murdered while calling 911 for
help. Police arrive just moments later, but weren't able to capture the
culprit."
OR the scene could really delve into the morality of it by getting into the gray area.
"I
heard a noise and since I knew that my parents wouldn't be home for
days, I was certain that it wasn't them. More noises told me that
someone was in my house - possibly stealing our stuff. I pulled out my
cellphone to call the police and told them that there was an intruder in
my house and that I was afraid. She assured me that they had someone on
their way and then promised to stay on the phone with me, but that I
should remain quiet.
I don't care if they steal from us so long as
they don't hurt me, but what if they find me and want to rape me? What
if they just decide to shoot me to get me out of their way? In panic, I
grabbed the gun from my dad's bed-side dresser, and then ran to my room
and into my closet. Trying to hide, I did my best not to make a sound. I
peered out of the crack in my closet door and saw someone with a ski
mask over their face come my way.
Oh my god, I'm going to die!
The
closet door opened and I pulled the trigger before I could even think
about what I was doing. The police dispatcher was still on the phone
with me and asked me what happened. I told her that I had shot the
intruder, and she replied by telling me that the police would arrive in
approximately 2 minutes, and that in the meantime I should continue to
hide in case there's more than one intruder.
I stared at the person
I'd shot in horror! I felt numb and terrible, like a monster had settled
in the pit of my stomach. I wanted to be sick but I couldn't risk
calling any attention to me. The masked intruder groaned and called out
my name.
How does he know me? With my heart in my throat, I decided
to remove his mask so I could look him in the eye and ask him why he
wanted to hurt me. With my heart feeling heavier than it had ever felt
before, it dawned on me that I was staring at my boyfriend. I covered my
mouth with a hand, but my stomach rebelled anyway. I barely had time to
drop to my hands and knees before I vomited everywhere!
As I
heaved, the police arrived, crashing into things as they rushed to make
sure that I was alright. I sobbed as they pointed their guns at me and
then pointed to my boyfriend, screaming. I shot him! I thought he was
going to kill me and I shot him!"
It may sound like I am
condoning guns and shooting trespassers in my hastily thrown together
scenario here, but what I am really doing is saying: If this happened to
you, what would you do? Would you make the same choices? Would you make
different ones? What if the intruder really was an intruder? As a
parent, what would you want your child to do in this situation?
This blog is all about me and how my different beliefs and perspectives make me weird. At first, I had no intention of posting my stories to my blog, but now that seems to be the biggest reason people visit my blog, lol! So come read about me, and let me know what you think!
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Thursday, January 31, 2013
Wednesday, January 30, 2013
Conform or Break the Rules?
Now that one of my stories - The Hero's Son - is getting closer and closer to being a real book, I am questioning whether or not to publish it as an ebook. The reason WHY is that in the ENTIRE story, there is ONE (and a half) scene that is relatively graphically descriptive sexually. The rest of the book could be considered E for everyone, but that scene firmly puts it in the OT (Older Teen) category. I'm fine with that, but as I reread the scene a couple of time, I realized that it might be a little TOO graphic even for an OT audience.
I got confused because I have read plenty of things rated OT which contained fairly descriptive sex scenes. So I asked for some perspective on a forum dedicated to Young Adult Fiction and GLBTQ. Would this be allowed?
The answer was basically yes and no. Sex is allowed in books aimed at teens, but it needs to be mainly off page OR integral to the story. I consider the scene integral, and since I am not considering using a standard publisher, I don't have to worry about conforming to their standards.
Even so, I'm thinking that for the actual ebook, I might tone the scene down a tad because... well, because parents might read the book and object to the whole thing based on one short scene!
Here's the funny thing in my mind: Parents were divided into two camps: One didn't care about the sex content of what their teens read. Many acknowledged that their teens will purposely read adult books just for the sex scenes, and don't feel the need to censor what they read. The other half of parents were like: no, all sex should be off page - meaning you can say things like: "We kissed and then we went to bed and had sex." But you can't describe the specific details.
As for the teens who answered my question, they were all like: "Why not? If we don't want to read the sex, we'll just skip it."
SO, what I'm getting from this is that as a self published author, I could simply leave the scene as is and put a warning on the book, and then let the reader decide if they want to read it or not. Also, it's a really short and to the point scene, so it's not like I suddenly added 10 pages of hardcore erotica to a YA book. It's not going to be a big deal.
Moving on, as I was researching this topic, I came across a couple of people in other threads that mentioned that there were a few books that contained erotica between teenagers. I was curious because I have written quite a bit of erotica featuring teenagers, so I wanted to know if this was a sub-genre that I could market.
My answer was a resounding no! This contradicted the stated fact that there are some out there, apparently. The reasoning is that for legal reasons, NO ONE wants to publish stories featuring people under the age of 18 having sex. Like erotic, get you horny sex. A self publisher could, but runs the risk of getting into trouble with Amazon or whomever they use to sell their books.
SIGH! I understand that basically no one wants that that one pitbull-like troll who gets off on causing trouble to sue for "offensive" content, but here's what I don't get:
This is America, land of the supposed free, such as freedom of speech and the press - which therefore includes the written word. I can point to quite a few examples of work originally created in Japan that contains fairly graphic pictures of sex (not actually showing penetration, but you can easily see what's going on) that is considered suitable for Older Teens that IS SOLD HERE! Obviously my writing an erotic scene is less offensive than someone drawing pictures of it.
Also, I know that there are plenty of people who understand that all erotica is FANTASY, and actually enjoy reading the "Taboo" stuff. I've had readers ASK me to write fantasies that could pretty much get me thrown in jail if I actually did them in real life! The point of reading and writing about them is to express the forbidden things in a way that harms no one.
So, getting back to the Japanese created works that do contain sex. It was said that the reason it's okay for them to do that is that their culture is not so repressed when it comes to sex. It's considered natural and normal. Not taboo. Personally, having studied the culture quite a bit myself, I think it's actually more like they expect such a high level of politeness and respect from everyone that they know that one of the ways to provide an outlet for the taboo things is to make it part of their literature and television. The people can live it vicariously rather than in person.
Lastly, people mentioned that everything has become over-sexed. That our society has become degenerate because sex is everywhere. That's one of the reasons parents are SO insistent that their teens literature is sex free, because they don't want to encourage their kids to have sex. Period. I think this is a mistake. That by saying: "Avoid sex!" the teen is then bombarded with the sex that sells and has no responsible role models when it comes to sex.
I think that if teens were encouraged to read books that considered sex sacred and something to be done ONLY when they want to for very clear reasons - I don't judge the reasons, I just think the teens should be absolutely clear on WHY they want to do it before doing it. Maybe then girls will stop having sex because they were pressured into it or thought that it might make them popular or get them child-support.
Sad to say, but yes, I have heard plenty of girls equate the risk of getting pregnant as no big deal because the baby daddy would have to take care of them by giving them money. Yeah... Way to discourage unsafe sex...
Not!
The point of all of this is that I have had my head spinning for days. Do I conform to social expectations, OR do I break the rules and go my own way. Past experience - EXTENSIVE past experience - has taught me that going my own way is SO much harder. All it would take is one Prudy Pitbullish Troll to review my book - assuming that I take the sex out and conform - and say that while my book is okay, my blog has "child porn" galore on it! I would then be judged based on repressive moral standards and only those readers who are actually looking for child porn would read my book... and then be disappointed and give me a bad review based on that, sigh...
I'm just struggling right now with this: Do I want to cave in to the (largely imaginary) pressure to fit into society and write according to the rules? OR do I want to continue to push the taboos and pray that no one comes after my ass in the long run?
To be honest, I WANT to be different. To stand out and boldly say that books should not fit in one - or even several - narrowly defined boxes (genres). However, I DON'T want to be labelled as a bad author across the board because I have a wide variety of stories and some of them don't mesh well with the others. AKA be judged on ALL my works based off of ONE that offends someone.
Grr! Now I'm just ranting in circles. Sorry!
Thanks for reading and have a happy day :-)
Roxanne
I got confused because I have read plenty of things rated OT which contained fairly descriptive sex scenes. So I asked for some perspective on a forum dedicated to Young Adult Fiction and GLBTQ. Would this be allowed?
The answer was basically yes and no. Sex is allowed in books aimed at teens, but it needs to be mainly off page OR integral to the story. I consider the scene integral, and since I am not considering using a standard publisher, I don't have to worry about conforming to their standards.
Even so, I'm thinking that for the actual ebook, I might tone the scene down a tad because... well, because parents might read the book and object to the whole thing based on one short scene!
Here's the funny thing in my mind: Parents were divided into two camps: One didn't care about the sex content of what their teens read. Many acknowledged that their teens will purposely read adult books just for the sex scenes, and don't feel the need to censor what they read. The other half of parents were like: no, all sex should be off page - meaning you can say things like: "We kissed and then we went to bed and had sex." But you can't describe the specific details.
As for the teens who answered my question, they were all like: "Why not? If we don't want to read the sex, we'll just skip it."
SO, what I'm getting from this is that as a self published author, I could simply leave the scene as is and put a warning on the book, and then let the reader decide if they want to read it or not. Also, it's a really short and to the point scene, so it's not like I suddenly added 10 pages of hardcore erotica to a YA book. It's not going to be a big deal.
Moving on, as I was researching this topic, I came across a couple of people in other threads that mentioned that there were a few books that contained erotica between teenagers. I was curious because I have written quite a bit of erotica featuring teenagers, so I wanted to know if this was a sub-genre that I could market.
My answer was a resounding no! This contradicted the stated fact that there are some out there, apparently. The reasoning is that for legal reasons, NO ONE wants to publish stories featuring people under the age of 18 having sex. Like erotic, get you horny sex. A self publisher could, but runs the risk of getting into trouble with Amazon or whomever they use to sell their books.
SIGH! I understand that basically no one wants that that one pitbull-like troll who gets off on causing trouble to sue for "offensive" content, but here's what I don't get:
This is America, land of the supposed free, such as freedom of speech and the press - which therefore includes the written word. I can point to quite a few examples of work originally created in Japan that contains fairly graphic pictures of sex (not actually showing penetration, but you can easily see what's going on) that is considered suitable for Older Teens that IS SOLD HERE! Obviously my writing an erotic scene is less offensive than someone drawing pictures of it.
Also, I know that there are plenty of people who understand that all erotica is FANTASY, and actually enjoy reading the "Taboo" stuff. I've had readers ASK me to write fantasies that could pretty much get me thrown in jail if I actually did them in real life! The point of reading and writing about them is to express the forbidden things in a way that harms no one.
So, getting back to the Japanese created works that do contain sex. It was said that the reason it's okay for them to do that is that their culture is not so repressed when it comes to sex. It's considered natural and normal. Not taboo. Personally, having studied the culture quite a bit myself, I think it's actually more like they expect such a high level of politeness and respect from everyone that they know that one of the ways to provide an outlet for the taboo things is to make it part of their literature and television. The people can live it vicariously rather than in person.
Lastly, people mentioned that everything has become over-sexed. That our society has become degenerate because sex is everywhere. That's one of the reasons parents are SO insistent that their teens literature is sex free, because they don't want to encourage their kids to have sex. Period. I think this is a mistake. That by saying: "Avoid sex!" the teen is then bombarded with the sex that sells and has no responsible role models when it comes to sex.
I think that if teens were encouraged to read books that considered sex sacred and something to be done ONLY when they want to for very clear reasons - I don't judge the reasons, I just think the teens should be absolutely clear on WHY they want to do it before doing it. Maybe then girls will stop having sex because they were pressured into it or thought that it might make them popular or get them child-support.
Sad to say, but yes, I have heard plenty of girls equate the risk of getting pregnant as no big deal because the baby daddy would have to take care of them by giving them money. Yeah... Way to discourage unsafe sex...
Not!
The point of all of this is that I have had my head spinning for days. Do I conform to social expectations, OR do I break the rules and go my own way. Past experience - EXTENSIVE past experience - has taught me that going my own way is SO much harder. All it would take is one Prudy Pitbullish Troll to review my book - assuming that I take the sex out and conform - and say that while my book is okay, my blog has "child porn" galore on it! I would then be judged based on repressive moral standards and only those readers who are actually looking for child porn would read my book... and then be disappointed and give me a bad review based on that, sigh...
I'm just struggling right now with this: Do I want to cave in to the (largely imaginary) pressure to fit into society and write according to the rules? OR do I want to continue to push the taboos and pray that no one comes after my ass in the long run?
To be honest, I WANT to be different. To stand out and boldly say that books should not fit in one - or even several - narrowly defined boxes (genres). However, I DON'T want to be labelled as a bad author across the board because I have a wide variety of stories and some of them don't mesh well with the others. AKA be judged on ALL my works based off of ONE that offends someone.
Grr! Now I'm just ranting in circles. Sorry!
Thanks for reading and have a happy day :-)
Roxanne
Tuesday, January 29, 2013
The Hero's Son - Part VIII
Part
VIII
“Son,
I–”
“Just
hear me out!” Rip insisted when he and R.J. returned from their
patrol and found Henry just getting off phone duty. They were now
standing in the kitchen with Renee. R.J. couldn't decide if he wanted
to stalk away angrily or stay and listen.
“I
know I haven't had time to think this through, but I really think
it's a good idea!” Rip argued.
“Son,
I–”
“Just
think about it! Most other kids my age go off to college!” Rip
exclaimed.
“Yes,
I–”
“It's
really not fair since I don't need to go to college. I'm fully
trained and will have this job for the rest of my life, but even so,
I think it would be a good idea to experience a bit more of the world
and get some tougher experience!”
“Stop!”
Henry finally shouted. “I agree!”
“No
really, it'll be good for me, and R.J.! Wait; what?” Rip stared at
his father in confusion.
Renee
laughed. “Your father and I had time to talk this over while you
were still on patrol, and we decided that you have a point.”
“If
you go to another city, you can join their Hero Squad, and then when
you are ready, you can come home,” Henry elaborated.
“You
mean it!” Rip squealed like he was still a little kid and then
hugged his parents exuberantly.
R.J.
bit his lip and frowned as he watched them. Considering that they had
spent the entire afternoon arguing, he and Rip hadn't had any time at
all to talk about this possibility, so R.J. didn't know how he felt
about it. Never once had he considered moving anywhere, not even to
the house he still owned from before his father died.
R.J.
decided to think about it as he changed and showered in the men's
locker room. He walked away silently, feeling like he was an
outsider. He also felt like starting a fight. Nothing would please
him more right now than beating Rip until he passed out!
Rip
sighed morosely when he realized that R.J. was no longer in the
kitchen with them. “We've been fighting almost all day...” he
admitted without intending to.
“What
about?” Renee asked curiously. R.J. was usually quiet and most of
the time it took a lot to provoke his temper.
“Jenna,”
Rip stated. “For some reason, he thinks Jenna and I are getting
serious.”
“Then
you need to go make sure he stops thinking that!” Renee exclaimed
supportively.
Rip
sighed heavily. “I know...”
Something
in his tone made his parents raise their eyebrows and give him a
suspicious look. Henry cleared his throat.
“Um,
are
you getting serious with Jenna?”
“No!
Why would you think that?! She's my best friend, and only
my best friend!” Rip growled in frustration as he stalked out of
the room.
He
nearly stomped all the way to his room, and then showered as quickly
as possible. Afterwards, he wrapped a towel around his waist and
rushed to answer his phone.
“Hey
Jenna,” Rip greeted, flopping onto his bed. He turned slightly onto
his side and scratched at an itch on his inner thigh, which made his
towel fall open slightly, but he wasn't concerned because if anyone
happened to come into his room, he was facing away from the door and
they wouldn't see anything important.
In
the hall, R.J. heard Rip talking and silently opened the door to
their room just enough to hear him clearly. One eye peered through
the crack to see if anyone was in the room with him. All he saw was
Rip lying on his bed with a towel draped over him. Movement inside
the towel made R.J. wonder if Rip was whacking off.
“Do
you think we will last all night?” Rip asked. Then he laughed.
“Whatever Jenna! You'll see! … … Oh? You doubt my skills? …
Ha! Whatever!
I
bet I'll make you wet yourself!”
“What?!”
R.J. demanded angrily, shoving the door open.
Rip
turned to look at R.J., and then looked at himself the way his
boyfriend must see him. The thought that R.J. assumed that Rip was
playing with himself while talking on the phone with Jenna made him
blush, he sat up and hastily covered his lap since the door was now
wide open.
“R.J.!”
Rip's blush got even deeper when he realized that his conversation
sounded highly incriminating. “Uh, I'm gonna have to call you
back!” He hung up before Jenna could respond.
R.J.
forced himself to not
start shouting at the top of his lungs. Instead, he growled softly
and shut the door. He took a few deep breaths to calm his temper.
“I
get it. I always knew that one day you would betray me like I
betrayed you. What I don't understand is why you won't just tell me
that you'd rather be with Jenna. Do you hope to make this as painful
as possible?”
Rip
gaped at R.J. in absolute shock. His blood started to boil.
“Now
wait just one minute!” Rip stated menacingly. “What do you mean
you always knew I'd betray you? What makes you think I could ever do
something like that?!”
R.J.
shrugged, trying to appear calm and uncaring. “If I can do it, you
can. Besides, you're like a book... Actually you're even more
transparent than a book because I don't even need to pick you up and
open you to read what's inside. You and Jenna have been giggling and
secretive all week. I just kept giving you the benefit of the doubt,
but I can't ignore it any longer.”
Rip
pulled on his hair in frustration and then sighed as deeply as
possible. He rolled out of bed – nearly tripping on his towel as it
fell to the floor and he decided to just leave it. Actually, in his
aggravation, he kicked it across the room. Striding to the bathroom,
he grabbed his discarded uniform and then held it up for R.J. to
observe. He shook his uniform as if strangling it.
“You
see this?!” Rip demanded, causing R.J. to frown and wonder if he
had gone crazy. Rip pulled open the velcro on one pocket and
retrieved a package before tossing his uniform on the floor. He threw
the package at R.J., knowing that he would catch it.
R.J.
stared at the package numbly. It was wrapped in shiny blue wrapping
paper and had a pretty gold bow on it. He was so taken aback that his
anger completely evaporated, replaced by a puzzled frown.
“What's
this?” R.J. wondered.
“It's
what I planned to give you tonight!”
Rip stated emphatically.
“Okay,
but what is it?”
“Just
open
it!” Rip yelled.
R.J.
was suddenly afraid of what the box held. It was small, about an inch
and a half squared, therefore it couldn't be a gun or ammo or
anything useful like that. His hands shook.
“But
it's not my birthday,” he protested.
“For
three more days!” Rip laughed. “You were adamant that you didn't
want a party or anything
so Jenna and I have had to be really sneaky about – uh –
nevermind...”
R.J.
leaned back and tilted his head to the side as he stared at Rip, a
frown on his face. “Wait... You mean...”
He
looked back down at the present, slowly tearing the wrapping paper
off. Inside the box were two matching gold necklaces, and when R.J.
held them up, he realized that one had a charm that said RJ and the
other said Rip. Both charms were about a half an inch square, which
was small but still manly.
Rip
was inexplicably embarrassed all of a sudden, which made him mumble.
“I wanted to give you the chain from my necklace for your birthday.
I wear it all the time and I figured that you would be happy because
I love it so much, but then...”
R.J.
looked up at him curiously. “Then what?”
“Jenna
reminded me that she had given it to me for my 16th
birthday and that you probably wouldn't appreciate me giving you
something that she
had given me,” Rip confessed.
R.J.
bit his lip as he nodded in agreement. Had Rip actually given him
that necklace right now, it probably would have pissed him off even
more.
“So
then – together – we came up with this idea instead: What if I
got a necklace for each of us? That way, you could wear one and I
could wear the other. We'd match, but it wouldn't necessarily be
obvious to everyone that these are a symbol of our commitment... to
each other,” Rip finished with a blush.
R.J.
noticed that Rip had taken off the much bigger gold necklace that had
a charm that said RIP, which was unusual since Rip never took it off.
Not even to take a shower. It had never come between them before,
despite being a gift from Jenna, but then again, Rip had never tried
to hide anything from R.J. before.
“I...
I love it,” R.J. admitted. He felt so stupid right now for thinking
that Rip was falling in love with Jenna. Or maybe just lust, since
R.J. was certain that Rip truly did love him.
Rip
walked closer to his boyfriend. “Happy birthday,” he murmured
huskily, obviously thinking of ways they could make up from their
fight.
R.J.
smiled almost shyly, and then took a moment to fasten one of the
necklaces around Rip's neck. Rip returned the favor, chuckling as he
realized that R.J. had switched them on purpose so that Rip wore the
one that said R.J. Either way it would be a symbol of their
commitment, but this way, it was a tiny bit more overt.
Rip
kissed R.J. softly. “I promise that you never have to worry about
Jenna and me.” He frowned as a thought occurred to him. “Also, I
had no idea that you still felt bad for what happened when we were
just kids. I promise that I will never betray you. If I should ever
happen to fall in love with someone else, I'll tell you. That way you
don't have to wonder and worry, but honestly, I just don't see that
ever happening.”
“I'm
sorry I doubted you,” R.J. apologized, giving Rip a kiss in return.
His mind was now brimming with ideas on how to make it up to Rip. He
pulled Rip closer and gave him a much deeper kiss.
The
two of them kissed for a long time. Long enough for R.J.'s clothes to
disappear. Eventually, they drifted to their bed – having upgraded
the two smaller separate beds into one bigger one at some point. They
pulled the blanket over themselves so that they could warm up, both
having started to feel cold as the air dried their skin after their
respective showers.
A
couple of minutes passed in silence, when suddenly the door to their
room opened.
“Rip
honey, I – Oh! Sorry!” Renee gasped and quickly left their room,
shutting the door behind her. In the hallway, she giggled to herself.
“I guess they worked things out!”
Rip
gasped, mortified over the fact that his mother had walked in on
them, but R.J. simply laughed and continued what he was doing.
*****
“I
told
you
that I planned to go hoverboarding with you tonight,” Rip stated
with a smug grin. R.J. simply nodded, looking away to cover his
embarrassment that he'd jumped to such a terrible conclusion. Rip
laughed, willing to forgive his boyfriend and move on. “Bet you
can't catch me!”
“Ha!”
R.J. shouted, following as Rip raced off. The two of them flew all
around the city. R.J. finally caught up to Rip about a half an hour
later, grabbing onto him and then steadying both of them as their
boards rocked violently.
“I
let you catch me,” Rip informed him with a chuckle.
“Whatever!”
R.J. muttered, seizing a demanding kiss from his boyfriend.
Rip's
cellphone rang, interrupting them. He checked it to find that it was
a text that read: Aww! Kissy kissy! He separated from R.J. to look
around.
“Hey!
Are you ever coming down here? You're going to be late!” Jenna
called out from the ground.
She
was standing near the beginning of a long line of people waiting to
gain entry to an enormous event center. Other people in line looked
around for a moment before realizing that she was looking up. They
looked up too and saw Rip slowly floating to the ground, followed by
R.J.
“It's
Richard Plantagenet!” A couple of girls squealed excitedly.
Jenna
started jumping up and down. “Don't you dare try to mob him! You'll
lose your place in line!”
“Aw
damn! It's Rip's girlfriend,” they muttered jealously, using Rip's
preferred name because the media had a habit of using it, and
therefore so did the people who eagerly kept an eye out for him.
Rip
jumped the last foot to the ground next to Jenna, and then leaned
over to give her a kiss on the cheek. Whispering into her ear, he
said: “Thank you for this.”
She
blushed happily and flapped her hand at him as if saying no
problem!
Rip
and R.J. stood behind her in line, accepting when she handed them
each a ticket. R.J. examined the tickets curiously. With a shout of
surprise, he threw his arms around Jenna in an impulsive hug, careful
not to smack her with the hoverboard he was now holding onto.
“Mistress
Apples is my absolute favorite!”
R.J. announced.
“Happy
birthday!” Jenna and Rip cheered in unison.
Before
R.J. could even respond, a pair of girls standing two people in front
of them squealed. “Can we get your autograph?” They held out
notebooks as they stretched to reach Rip without losing their place
in line.
“Oh
oh! Us too!” A couple of girls standing behind them in line burst
out bubbily. Other girls and women – and even a couple of guys who
considered Rip cool because he was now a Hero in his own right –
clamored to beg for an autograph as they mostly stayed in line.
“I
should've known this would happen,” Rip muttered softly before
sighing and taking a notebook. Pulling a monogrammed pen out of his
pocket – a gift from a fan that had been sent to him at some point
– he signed the page diagonally: Richard Indigo Plantagenet –
Rip. Upon further reflection, he added a note above his signature:
Good luck always! He handed the notebook back and took another.
A
good 20 notebooks later, Rip was beginning to wonder if the doors
would ever
open
to let them in. Suddenly, the doors did open, but not to let the
crowd pile in; to let out a handful of security guards surrounding an
utterly hot and provocatively dressed man. The man walked along the
outside of the ropes that defined the line until he got to Rip.
“Mr.
Plantagenet, I'm here on behalf of Mistress Apples. She's totally
thrilled that you're here to watch her and would like to invite you
back stage.”
“Uh...”
Rip said hesitantly. “I'm only here to celebrate my best friend's
birthday.” He gestured to R.J.
Utterly
hot was prepared for this. “Of course, right this way.” He
unfastened the velvet rope for the section and gestured for Rip,
R.J., and Jenna to follow him.
“Oh
my God!” R.J. whispered in awe. “I think I'm going to die from
happiness!”
Rip
laughed, graciously capitulating to the hottie's request. R.J. and
Jenna followed him as he followed gorgeous. The guards surrounded
them, which made it hard for the rest of the crowd to see that all
three of the lucky bastards were staring at to-die-for's tight,
black-leather-covered ass. They all moaned in appreciation, and then
giggled as they realized what they'd done.
They
were allowed to meet with Mistress Apples as the event center finally
opened it's doors to let the crowd in. She was also wearing very
little, but as they studied her, they realized that her outfit
covered her better than it appeared to, it's just that the color
scheme implied that more was showing that actually was. She was
famous as a singer in her early 20s who didn't take crap from anyone.
She was tough and did what she wanted no matter what anyone said.
They
expected her to be rude and maybe even arrogant, but she was
surprisingly open and friendly.
“Ah!
Richard Plantagenet!” She squealed and bounced like any other fan
girl. “I'm so excited to have you at my concert tonight!”
Even
though Rip was a tiny bit used to people treating him like he was a
superstar, he was baffled as to why Mistress Apples even knew he
existed. True, he was always on the local news, but he didn't think
that the rest of the country cared two bits about him.
“Thank
you,” he mumbled with a blush.
“Too
bad you have your girlfriend with you,” Mistress Apples stated with
a suggestive leer.
Rip
stammered in embarrassment. “Uh...”
Mistress
Apples laughed. “Maybe your friend here... I hear it's your
birthday, uh...”
“R.J.,”
he replied with a wide-eyed flush of shock. He was not
used to people treating him
like someone important!
Jenna
was trying hard not to bust up laughing as the rock star made both of
her friends thoroughly uncomfortable. They actually backed away from
her nervously. Any other boy would have taken Mistress Apples up on
her offer immediately!
Mistress
Apples fiddled with the charm on R.J.'s necklace as an excuse to get
closer to him. Then it occurred to her what she held in her hand. She
turned her head to look at Rip's neck and an expression of
enlightenment lit up her face.
“Oh...
I understand now. Too bad for me, I guess,” she stated with a
shrug. With a sweeping gesture, she gave them a quick tour of the
back stage area. “There's plenty of food and things to drink. Feel
free to help yourself. You can watch the show from literally the side
of the stage, or you can go to the VIP area right directly in front
of the stage.”
She
kissed R.J on the cheek, and then kissed Rip. With a laugh, she
hugged Jenna. “Sorry, but I'm not into girls!”
Jenna
laughed. “I'm not either!”
“But
for me you'd make an exception, right?” Mistress Apples asked
playfully.
“Sure
would!” Jenna replied with another laugh.
“Thought
so!” Mistress Apples smirked. “But I can't stay here and play.
I've gotta go finish getting my hair done. Only five more minutes
till the show!”
More
like 11 and a half minutes later, Rip, R.J. and Jenna stood off to
the side of the stage as music started playing thunderously. Jenna
squealed in excitement.
“Ah!
It's my favorite song!”
Mistress
Apples made quite a living singing songs of rebellion and standing up
for what you believed in. Her catch phrase was that she didn't take
crap from anyone! Sure enough, her song – which was a remake from
an old song – assured everyone:
“Oh
we're not going to take it! No! We ain't gonna take it! We're not
going to take it anymore!”
The
concert was a blast, and they even got to stay and party after it was
over. In Rip and Jenna's original plan, they were going to take R.J.
out to grab a bite to eat, and then probably go hoverboarding until
the crack of dawn, but this turned out so much better! By the time
the party wound down, Mistress Apples felt like she was their new
best friend. She put her arms around the three of them and gave them
each another smooch on the cheek.
“Hey,
I know we probably won't see each other until my next concert in
Marion City, but I'll give you my email address... the one I actually
check, lol! And... you can call me Tiffannie.”
“I
think I've just died and gone to heaven!” Both R.J. and Jenna
murmured.
Rip
was a bit less of a geeky fan and a bit more smooth. “I'm honored!”
They
all exchanged their information, and then it was Jenna who
embarrassed herself by yawning loudly. She giggled in an attempt to
cover her mortification. Rip nudged her playfully.
“And
who was the one that said I
couldn't stay awake all night?” He asked, referring to their phone
conversation from right after he'd gotten out of the shower.
“Yeah
yeah,” she muttered unappreciatively. “I'm still awake!”
Tiffannie
laughed. “What? Don't tell me that you Heroes are babies who can't
party all night!”
R.J.
decided to whisper in her ear, mostly to provoke a reaction from the
other partiers, who were slowly dispersing in order to find a bed;
presumably for sleep.
“I
bet you wouldn't say that if you did what we
do all day,” R.J. wagered, making it look like he was flirting with
her. She giggled, adding to the wrong impression that they were
creating.
“Oh
really? Too bad you can't show me...” she replied suggestively.
“We
should really go home,” Rip murmured, feeling sleepy himself now.
They'd had a long
day
after all. R.J. smirked at him as if asking: Now who's jealous?! Rip
simply shook his head. He knew that R.J. was just pretending to be
flirty, and so there was no need for jealousy.
“Let
me give you three a ride home,” Tiffannie suggested. “I've always
wanted to see the inside of a Hero headquarters!”
They
exchanged questioning looks, and then shrugged. “Sure, why not?”
Rip
and R.J. grabbed their hoverboards from where they'd stashed them
earlier, and then they all followed Tiffannie – their biggest
celebrity crush Mistress Apples! – to her big and expensive tour
bus. It was like a mini mansion on wheels!
She
had her driver drive them to Hero headquarters, and then gushed like
a total fangirl once more. “Oh wow! This is so cool!”
She
followed Jenna and R.J., linking arms with Rip as they walked. The
moment they entered headquarters – using a security access code
since it was after midnight and not quite 6AM yet – Josh looked up
at them from where he had sat answering phones most of the night.
“Holy
sh-” The rest was cut off as he fell out of his chair. He hastily
scrambled to his feet. “It's Mistress Apples!”
A
couple of Heroes were just getting changed in the locker rooms since
it was the end of their shift. Others were getting ready to go on
patrol. Still more Heroes were already in the sparring room to get in
a bit more practice before morning sparring. They all piled out to
see if the excited shout was true.
Renee
and Henry appeared from the door to the kitchen. Renee checked the
clock and frowned. “You're just getting home now?! I thought you
two were in bed hours ago!”
“Mom,”
Rip groaned in embarrassment.
Surprisingly,
it was Henry who came to his rescue. “Oh leave them alone! They've
obviously had fun partying after the concert.”
“Wow...”
Rip murmured in shock. “Thanks dad.”
“Ah!
Henry Plantagenet!!!” Mistress Apples squealed. “I watched you
fight some bad guy when I was just a little girl. You were like 10
feet in front of me! You've been my Hero ever since...” she purred
dreamily.
Henry
was used to this reaction and simply smiled at her. “Thank you.”
“Mistress
Apples! Can you sign my limited edition fan club photograph of you?”
Josh asked, producing the item in question from his wallet.
“Sure
thing!” She agreed with a kiss on his cheek. Josh just about passed
out from the shock of a kiss from her. His hands shook as he took the
signed photograph back from her.
After
that, Mistress Apples signed something for everyone, expressing how
grateful she was for Heroes in general, and how much she appreciated
it that they loved her. When she was done, she grinned at her three
new friends. They were now all wearing blue and white concert tee
shirts that had her name on the front and the dates of all the
concerts of her tour on the back.
Taking
a permanent marker from the desk, she decided to sign the tee shirts,
starting with Jenna. She wrote: Thanks for partying with me all.
Night. Long! Tiffannie – aka Mistress Apples. She gave Jenna a kiss
on the cheek and then wrote the same thing on R.J.'s shirt and kissed
his cheek. She ended with Rip, giggling as she kissed him once on
each cheek.
Several
of the Heroes thought it was unfair that Rip got two kisses when they
hadn't gotten any at all – aside from Josh. They muttered to
themselves, glaring at Rip as they vowed to pay him back during
morning sparring. Rip chuckled nervously as he sensed death threats
being aimed at his back.
Tiffannie
linked her arm through Jenna's. “You said that you lived nearby,
right? Come on, I'll give you a ride home.”
Jenna
nodded and they left.
The
TV that had been Josh's only companion for most of his phone duty
suddenly caught their attention.
“Here's
footage from earlier. Mistress Apples' tour bus was spotted
traveling, and we followed it to its destination: Hero Headquarters!
Here she is getting out of the bus with none other than Richard
Plantagenet and his friends. Oh what's this? This just in, Mistress
Apples is getting back on her bus with Rip's longtime girlfriend! I
guess young Hero Jenna isn't taking any chances that the superstar is
going to steal her man!”
The
reporter went on to tell everyone how Rip and company had gotten
invited backstage for the concert, and speculated if he had made his
first equally famous friend. They seriously wondered why he hadn't
gone out partying with the hot young celebrity crowd before, and made
bets on whether or not he would do so frequently now that Rip was 18.
“Bah!”
Rip exclaimed in disgust. “Why do they always get everything so
wrong?!” He tapped R.J. on the arm. “I'm going to bed!”
R.J.
nodded, a huge yawn threatening to break his jaw.
Rip
kissed his mother on the cheek. “Please don't wake us for anything,
not even if the world is about to end! I'm too tired to care...”
Renee
laughed. “Go on honey.” She then kissed R.J. on the cheek. “I'm
glad your pre-birthday celebration turned out so well.”
“Thanks,”
R.J. replied with a smile. He hugged her, and then waved to everyone
else as he followed Rip to their room.
Rip
groaned once they were alone in their room. “I wish I had energy
for a bit of fun...”
“Me
too,” R.J. agreed. They didn't even have the energy to get
undressed and simply snuggled up in bed for a moment before passing
out.
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Saturday, January 26, 2013
In Brist's Time - Chapter 8
Chapter 8
“Would
the lady consider coming with us?” The man who looked incredibly
like Brist’s friend Randy asked of her. Brist was standing next to
Nicholas, who immediately thought of her as a traitor. The whole
family was standing approximately 10 feet from the limp body of
Lucas, who was still lying in the exact spot where he had fallen.
Regan and Raven were each trying to hide behind an older brother.
“Like
hell I would!” Brist answered the thief. He thought about her
answer a moment.
“Is
that a yes or a no?” He asked, honestly not sure.
“Do
you honestly think that I would even consider
going with you after you shot a member of my family?” Brist said,
giving him a duh expression.
“Well,
the way I see it, you should come show us how grateful you are that
we didn’t shoot you,” he answered somewhat playfully.
“Well,
the way I
see it, you should go fuck yourself,” Brist said, stunning
everyone. So therefore, it was a moment before the bandit could even
think of something to say.
“Search everyone for anything
valuable and collect it from them,” he ordered his men.
Of the nine men that responded to that
command, six collected the horses and three took everything that they
could find of value from the members of the Evans family. Brist just
happened to be last, and just moments before one of the men searched
her for her valuables, Brist had noticed the others trying to take
her horse.
“Stop
it, you can’t take my horse!” She called out to the men roughly
trying to get her horse to cooperate. Just at that moment, the man
removing her valuables from her moved to take the broach from her
shawl. She slapped his hand away.
“That’s
not mine. Leave it alone,” she growled at him.
The
man slapped her across the face, and Nicholas would have punched the
man for his action, but Brist beat him to it. Not only did Brist
punch the man, but when he tried to punch back, all her kickboxing
lessons came to the front of her mind. She strategically blocked his
attack, thereby leaving him open to the powerful right jab that
knocked the man to the ground, out cold.
For
probably the hundredth time, Brist mentally thanked Jesse for keeping
her butt in all those classes. She had always loved kickboxing, but
it was the strength-training that really helped her now. Without it,
she'd probably only be able to daze the bandit.
She
looked at him laying on the ground with a smirk od satisfaction. His
two partners in collecting the loot immediately forgot that they had
guns in their belts and ran at Brist with intentions of putting her
in her place.
Brist quickly judged
that neither of these new opponents had much fighting skill, other
than that acquired by getting into a lot of petty fights. Her level
of skill in the art of kickboxing, which had won her many state and
two national championships, was more than sufficient to combat these
two. She blocked the first man’s attempt at a jab and punched him
in the gut, which doubled him over, allowing her time to pick up her
skirt just high enough to land a kick in the middle of the second
opponents chest.
By
this time all of the other thieves, except for the two still
attempting to control Cream – and the leader – had gathered
around the fight to watch. The entire Evans family stood gaping in
disbelief at their newest member.
Brist
briefly glanced at her first opponent and determined that he had
recovered from the punch to the gut. He was now coming up behind her.
She still had her skirts held up, and so she kicked him with her back
still turned on him, because she figured that he’d never expect it.
Whirling around to face him, she jumped slightly, which enabled her
to kick him in the jaw, thereby knocking him to the ground, joining
the very first attacker in out cold status.
Now, she quickly
allowed her skirts to fall back into place, as she was once again
facing away from her opponent. However, she knew that he was running
to attack her, his tactic was to add speed as power to fuel his
attack. She bent over and swept his feet out from under him with one
of her legs, causing him to land on his back. He immediately rolled
over and returned to his feet, at which time Brist connected a
powerful right jab to his jaw, causing him to join his predecessors
on the ground in out cold status.
Just then, one of the
men watching the fight decided to give it a try, but he was stopped
by his leader, who was both upset and amused by the fight he had just
witnessed.
“Enough!”
He shouted an irrefutable command for his men to stop. “I would ask
you again to join our band, for you would help our cause greatly, but
I fear that you would simply refuse once more. So instead, I will ask
you nicely to surrender the broach, or I will shoot you between the
eyes myself,” he frowned, seemingly to discourage further
opposition from her, but really, he was upset at himself for allowing
things to get to this point. Brist looked at him and saw that indeed
his pistol was aimed directly at her head.
“Please, Brist, just give it to him.
It is not worth dying for,” Regina begged the woman who had come to
mean so much to her in just a short time.
Brist sighed, unpinned the broach, and
threw it straight at the man’s head with enough force for it to
cause some damage, but the man caught it, wincing slightly at the
pain it caused in his hand. The leader motioned for his men to gather
their fallen companions, the discarded bags of loot, and get away as
quickly as possible. It was easy to see that his mood about the
situation was darkening.
“This
dumb animal won’t cooperate,” one of the two men who were still
trying to subdue Brist’s horse complained. Brist was silently proud
as she watched her horse show every bit of defiance that Brist
herself had just displayed. The older image of Randy growled, his
mood growing ever darker.
“Just
shoot the beast!” He ordered.
“No!” Brist commanded. “If you
shoot her, I promise I will hunt your ass down and murder you in your
sleep!” She inhaled and exhaled, trying to regain her calm. “If
you will allow me to calm her, you’ll find it a thousand times
easier to control her.”
The
very gorgeous man, who looked incredibly like her much nicer friend
Randy, contemplated the suggestion a moment, signaling that the horse
should not be shot just yet.
“I
will allow you to calm your horse, but if she continues to be
uncooperative, than I will not hesitate to have her shot,” he
answered after what seemed like an eternity.
Brist ran to her
beloved horse, enveloping her in a hug. The two men who had been
fighting like hell with the horse were amazed by how quickly the mare
calmed for her mistress. Brist whispered instructions in Creams ear
for her to go with the marauders, and that she shouldn’t worry, for
Brist would rescue her as soon as she had the chance. Then, she
handed the reins to one of the two men, telling him to be gentle with
her horse or she would remove a very vital part of his anatomy. The
man must have believed her, for he treated the horse as if it were
the Queen of England herself.
By this time, all of the bandits –
except for the man leading Cream away, and the leader – had
disappeared into the forest. Soon the man and Cream joined them,
heading in the direction of what will be the town, Brist noted. As
soon as all his men were safely out of sight, the leader rode off,
calling “Until we meet again!” over his shoulder.
“David,
we’re stranded, what ever
shall we do?” Regina asked her husband.
“Well,
my dear, we shall just have to walk home,” he answered her,
resigned to the prospect.
“But
what about Lucas?” She asked fretfully as Nicholas examined him for
life signs.
“He’s
alive, and if we can stop the flow of blood, he should make it. I
think the only reason he’s unconscious is because of how hard he
hit the ground,” Nicholas informed everyone. He then proceeded to
shake Lucas to try to wake him. Brist was upset by the way Nicholas
was handling the situation.
“You shouldn’t do
that, you could make his wound worse!” Brist told him, not
understanding why he didn’t know as much already.
“Stop,
I’m awake,” Lucas moaned.
“Can
you walk?” Nicholas asked him as he helped him to his feet. Lucas
took a few test steps.
“Apparently,
yes,” he commented after he was relatively certain that he wouldn’t
fall.
“Thank
God you’re alive!” Regina cried, hugging him as tightly as she
could.
“Mother,
you’re hurting me,” Lucas protested, obviously trying not to
wince.
Brist
couldn’t believe these people; they had no sense at all! Here was a
man who had just been shot – and was still bleeding fairly badly –
and they had him up and walking around!
“You
should lie down; movement will only make your bleeding worse,”
Brist advised.
“If
he lies down, then how will he get home?” Nicholas asked.
“Get
home? He should get medical attention, and be allowed time for the
blood to stop before he goes home,” Brist argued.
“I
suppose that in addition to knowing how to fight, you are a doctor
too.” Nicholas said sarcastically.
“No, I’m not a
doctor,” Brist muttered matter of factly.
“Then
how
would you know just what needs to be done?” Nicholas asked with a
slight sneer at this highly uppity woman.
“I
would think it would be common sense,” Brist sneered right back at
him.
“Common
sense tells me that it would be far more prudent to get him home as
quickly as possible so that the doctor can be fetched to remove the
bullet before the wound becomes poisoned,” Nicholas stated, his
voice escalating until it near approached shouting.
“Well,
you yelling at me isn’t doing him any good,” Brist retorted
loudly.
“I am not yelling! If
I were yelling, you would be shaking in your boots from fright,”
Nicholas explained loudly, but not quite as loudly as before.
“That’s
enough!” David ordered, exasperated by their bickering.
“Please,
don’t fight you two. I’m fine except for a mild, well
excruciating, pain in my arm, and a sore backside. It is after all my
body, and I say I will be able to walk home just fine,” Lucas
insisted.
“Are
you certain?” Nicholas asked.
“Quite,”
Lucas answered gruffly. Nicholas unconsciously looked to Brist for
approval, and she gave it by sighing and motioning for him to lead
the way.
“I suppose that if he had any truly
serious consequence to his fall, such as internal bleeding, or a
concussion, or even cracked or broken bones, then he would probably
not be able to walk or move at all,” Brist reasoned, sighing again.
Glancing around, she noticed that everyone was looking at Lucas as if
to determine if he really was okay or not. David was finally
recovering his sense after the various surprises of the day, and
decided to take the matter in hand.
“Morgan,
run and fetch the doctor. Hopefully, the two of you’ll be able to
reach the house shortly after we do,” David ordered his second
youngest son.
“Shall
I go with him father?” Curtis asked.
“No.
The doctor only has one horse, and the three of you will not be able
to ride it,” David replied. Morgan began to run in the direction of
the doctor, who lived in the same direction as Atlanta, which is
where they had been headed to shop.
“Please
hurry!” His mother called out anxiously after him.
“Brist,
you said that you knew who was the first person to be buried in the
family cemetery. Well, I’ve been wondering, is it me?” Lucas
asked his relative from the future.
“No, you have nothing to worry about,
the first person buried in that cemetery died after a long life,”
Brist lied encouragingly. She really had no idea if he’d die since
he wasn’t buried in the cemetery at all. She could only assume that
it wasn’t right now. Regina sighed and hugged her son once more,
gently this time.
“I’d
hate to rush a wounded man, but it’s going to rain soon, and I
think we had better be heading home,” Jonathan imparted, calling
everyone’s attention to the darkening sky. Regina was never one to
be afraid of a storm, but she was worried about her wounded son, and
a whimper escaped her before she could banish her morbid thoughts.
“Don’t
worry, my dear. Everything will be just fine,” David assured his
wife. Then simultaneously, as if it had been rehearsed, the entire
family took a step in the direction of their house. Just after
Jonathan confirmed that they had reached the halfway home point, it
began to rain. Nicholas draped his coat over Lucas so that he
wouldn’t catch a cold in addition to being shot.
“My
dress! It’s ruined!” Raven exclaimed in dismay.
“I’m
getting wet,” Regan whined as she clutched her brother Jonathan’s
sleeve.
“I’m
sorry love, but you’ll just have to put up with it,” he told her.
“Girls,
look,” Regina addressed her twins, calling their attention to the
way that she had pulled her over-skirt up to form a makeshift
umbrella. Mentally, she was thankful for the custom of wearing a few
underskirts, or else she would be showing off her hinny to the whole
world! The twins copied their mother happily, thankful to keep their
hair from getting wet.
Brist had always enjoyed the rain. Her
favorite thing to do was to sit out in her tent – which had a clear
roof – and watch it rain and storm outside. In Minnesota, there
were usually plenty of storms, and they normally weren’t warm like
this one was.
She had a habit of always dancing in
the rain, as if giving thanks to the rain and storm Gods for not
destroying her home in the beautiful display of power. Mother Nature
never failed to amaze her. In fact, her love of the storm had piqued
her interest in the nature-based religion, Wicca, but she was still a
novice and the most she really did was light a candle to honor the
sabbats and full moons.
Brist
decided to sneak off, figuring that if anyone noticed her doing so,
they would think she was going to relieve herself. As soon as she was
out of sight, she began to dance. Normally, she would cheer, shout,
and generally make a joyful raucous, but she didn’t wish to call
her old-fashioned family’s attention to her. The last thing she
needed was for them to think she was a witch. You know, the bad kind
that everyone tried to hang.
Nicholas
had seen her wander off, and did think that she had needed to relieve
herself, but when she failed to return after a sufficient period of
time, he whispered to his father that Brist had to be lost. He
Promised he would find her and make sure that she made her way home
safely.
Now,
here he was, staring mesmerized at the redheaded woman as she danced
in wild abandon in the rain. Her back was to him, and so she hadn’t
noticed him as of yet. Nicholas felt his loins tighten and decided he
liked the way her hair brushed the top of her rounded bottom when she
tilted her head back and cackled.
Cackled?
What on earth had possessed him to compare her joyous laughter to
that of a… Come to think of it, it did sound like a soft, sweet
cackle.
Brist decided that her family had to be
far enough away to not hear her if she started to sing, especially
since the rain should add extra sound dampeners to mask the sounds
she was about to make.
“I’m
singing in the rain, just singing in the rain, what a glorious
feeling, I’m so happy again!” Brist belted out in an entirely way
too cheerful tone of voice, and in her glee – which seemed to
intensify with each moment that passed – she decided to do
something she hadn’t done since 10th grade, over two years ago.
She
had been in gymnastics then, rather than strength-training, and by
now she must be badly out of practice. So, holding her breath and
praying that she wouldn’t break her neck, she decided to do a
couple back flips before she chickened out. But first, before she
could do them, she had to hike her skirt up and tie it out of her
way. After she completed two back flips successfully, and nary a
stumble, she decided to immediately switch to a cartwheel forward
flip combination.
Once her feet returned
to the ground after finishing her flips, Brist jumped up and down,
cheering herself on proudly.
Nicholas
was nearly undone at the sight of her naked legs, which were made
that much more enticing by the rivets of rain streaming down them. Is
there anything that this woman can’t do?
He wondered in amazement.
Brist
had caught a glimpse of Nicholas while she had been tumbling around
and wondered just how long he had been watching her. Also, she
wondered just exactly how long he would continue to watch her before
he made his presence known. She figured that as a man, he would
probably wait until she had caught him. Deciding that it would be
inordinately fun to tease him, she opted to do just that in the only
way she could think of at the moment.
Brist
unknotted her skirt, slipped it off, and tossed it on Regina’s
shawl – which she had placed in a relatively dry spot earlier. Her
vest and shirt followed it seconds later. Brist paused a few moments,
wondering whether or not she should remove her lacy underwear. She
eventually shook her head and also decided that she had no desire to
have her breasts flopping around and probably getting bruised while
she danced, pranced, and flipped in a showy display designed to tease
the man who thought he was spying on her undetected. As a result, she
re-donned her vest-like bodice, lacing it up tightly.
Nicholas’ breath
ceased entirely as he watched, her now literally half naked body
enticed him, enhanced by the bright red panties she wore. Her top was
mostly covering her, but her cleavage plumped out over the top of it
oh so invitingly. He had also gotten a good look at her breasts from
his a moment ago, and wished that he could tear her bodice off and
see them again.
As for the other
garment, her bottoms were tiny, and disappeared into her luscious
buttocks. His body protested the lack of oxygen and began to breathe
again, but his breath was erratic and came in gasps. Nicholas began
to wonder if she was trying to kill him, but decided that she still
had no idea he was watching her. If she knew I was here, she'd
squeal in maidenly protest, right?
Then
again, how could she possibly be innocent and know how to move her
body like that? He
wondered.
Brist
was dancing as if she was making love to the rain. Or rather, as if
the rain were making love to her. She touched her body as if her
hands were the hands of a lover. He decided that she wasn’t
innocent at all, and that she really was just a slut who had come up
with an extremely clever plan to worm her way into a decent family. A
plan to never have to worry about money or fitting into society. She
wasn’t fit to be anything but a mistress!
Does
she hope to entice one of my brothers into marriage?
Excluding Morgan and Curtis, every one of his brothers were of a
marrying age. Well, I
am not
going to allow that to happen! She will be
my mistress, or I will throw her out onto the streets!
Just as soon as his parents and the rest of his family left...
By
this time, he was so hard with all his thoughts of her as a mistress
– and with her dancing as erotically as she was – that he
considered making her into his mistress right then and there. But he
was stopped by the look on his mother’s face if she should ever
find out. Instead, he stomped off to find some relief from the heat
in his loins that was near driving him mad.
Wasn’t
cold water supposed to banish a man’s erection?
Nicholas wondered. Granted the rain was warm, not cold, but it was
much, much colder than the heat emanating from his loins. One would
think that it would still have the same effect as cold water, but it
seemed to add to the sensation, causing him to hide behind the
nearest tree. He needed relief now!
Determined to find relief as soon as
possible, Nicholas unbuttoned his britches and took himself in hand.
Very upset and embarrassed with himself for having to spill his seed
without the presence of a woman – something that has never happened
to him before – Nicholas vowed that just as soon as his parents
left, he would make this woman his mistress, and once he had had his
fill of her, he would toss her out on the streets like the beggar she
assuredly was.
Finally, he found relief from the
plaguing torment that the redheaded woman with the velvety purple
eyes was causing him. He re-laced his britches and returned to the
spot where he had left Brist. He firmly buried the little voice that
told him that he would never tire of this woman in the back of his
head.
Once
Brist had discovered that her audience had left, she had given up her
dance and took up a reclining position under a branch that offered a
small amount of shelter. She felt as if she was tanning in a tankini,
only instead of sunshine covering her, it was rain.
“Are
you out of your ever-loving mind?!” Nicholas asked in a tone that
conveyed his near exasperation with this woman.
“No.
Why?” Brist asked, amused by his tone. He must have been very
affected by her tease.
“By now, it must be at least 15
minutes since I noticed that you were gone, and my mother will start
to worry herself sick if I don’t bring you back soon. Yet, here you
sit, half naked in the rain!” Nicholas was wondering if the girl
truly was daft. That could explain her whole from the future story.
“Get up and get dressed, before I drag you back exactly as you
are.”
“Oh
your mother would just love that! I’d bet that everyone would think
that you’d had your way with me. You’d have a wonderful time
explaining that!” Brist laughed.
Nicholas’
expression darkened to the point that Brist wondered if he might try
to kill her. Not wishing to get into yet another fight today, she
decided to obey his command to get dressed. She shrugged, not caring
that he watched. His expression changed as if to say that he wished
that he could watch her take the rest of her clothes off, not put
them on.
Men! Brist thought. That was
okay with her though; she enjoyed being looked at by men. Every one
of them thought that she would make a great conquest and she loved
proving them wrong. Often a man would come up to her while she was on
a date with Muskles and she would boldly send them on their way,
threatening bodily harm if they should bother her again.
Muskles always said that he never had
to worry about her cheating on him since she was always proving that
she only had eyes for him. And now, it would seem, she only had eyes
for the man that looked just like him, only much better, if that was
possible.
Soon,
she was dressed, and they had rejoined the family – who had stopped
to rest soon after Nicholas had left to retrieve Brist. Every member
of the family cringed at their approach and shook their head in
dismay, for Nicholas and Brist were arguing very loudly about whether
or not it was healthy to be exposed to the rain for an extended
period of time. Especially
wearing as little clothing as she was wearing. They had been carrying
on the same argument since Nicholas had “discovered” Brist.
“Can
the two of you hold a conversation without arguing about something?”
Jonathan demanded hotly.
“When
this woman can speak of something that makes sense, then
I will hold a conversation with her. Until then, every word that
comes out of her mouth does nothing but provoke an argument,”
Nicholas argued.
“I
provoke arguments?! As I recall, it was you that started that
particular argument,” Brist countered.
“Only
because you don’t seem to possess the sense God gave a frog! Notice
that they
at least have the sense to stay out of the rain, not seek out the
best spot to bask in it!” Nicholas said loudly, pointing to the
ground where it was true that there was not a frog to be found.
“Frogs are amphibious, and if they
aren’t in sight at the moment, it’s not because of the rain,”
Brist laughed. His logic lacked over two hundred years of accumulated
knowledge that Brist had been taught in school.
“Enough!
The two of you will cease to argue while in my presence! If I catch
you at it again, I will personally take you both out back and tan
your hides!” Regina commanded in her no-nonsense tone of voice. “Am
I understood?”
Both
of the recipients of her stern warning nodded in acceptance.
Satisfied, Regina turned her back to them so that she could ask David
to lead them on once more, and while her back was turned, Brist stuck
her tongue out at Nicholas, who started towards her as if he were
going to strangle her, but then he caught himself and sighed
impatiently. Brist – and everyone else who had seen the exchange –
began to chuckle. It was obvious that Brist’s mere presence was
driving him to near violence.
Regina
whirled around to see what was causing her family to chuckle and
received a smile of angelic innocence from Brist. Which caused
Nicholas to scowl in irritation.
David decided that he had better move
things along before the mischievous Brist did something else to
provoke his eldest son. So, hiding a grin, David lead the rain-sodden
party back to their house, which wasn’t too much farther along.
Nicholas
spent the time thinking about what he would do after he had tired of
having Brist as a mistress. He decided that he couldn’t possibly be
as cruel to her as he had planned, and that instead of throwing her
out into the streets, he would set her up in her own house, just as
he had with his prior and current mistresses.
Not
that there had really been all that many of them. He had two current
ones, which he’d had for about a year, and eight prior ones. He had
a habit of keeping a woman for about a year and then tiring of her.
His first he took on when he turned 21 – he was now 28 – and in
the past three years, as he made more frequent trips to France, he
had decided to have a mistress there in addition to the one in
London. He figured that now that he was going to be spending most of
his on land time in Georgia, he may as well have one here too.
Great!
Now I’ll have three women I only see every couple of months!
He thought to himself sarcastically. A
sailor’s life.. he
sighed.
While Nicholas had been
considering the benefits of having a mistress in every port, along
with the draw-back of not seeing them very often, Brist had occupied
herself with the twins. They were debating the coldness of the rain.
The twins insisted that the rain was cold and dreary, and Brist
informed them that she felt it to be warm and wonderful.
“The
temperature and pleasantness of the rain is really a matter of one’s
opinion,” David pointed out.
“You
mean you really
think it’s cold?” Brist asked incredulously.
“Actually,
I find it rather warm, but you must admit that the twins might find
it rather cold,” David answered her with a wink.
“Yes,
I suppose that is true.” Brist smiled at the kindly father who was
so very different from her own. She’d be willing to bet that he’d
never pay one of his daughter’s boyfriends to never see them again.
Just now, he was staring at his wife’s behind with an amused look
on his face.
“Wife,
you look extremely good with your petticoats in view,” David told
his beloved wife.
“David!”
Regina gasped, both scandalized and blushing from the thought of what
they could do the moment they returned home.
“I’m beginning to
think that I should forbid you from wearing anything over your
petticoats ever again,” he teased.
“You
would keep me half naked? Oh
the ton would have a riot with that!” Regina exclaimed with a
laugh.
“Sounds
like a delightful idea to me,” David laughed.
Nicholas
looked at Brist as if he were having similar thoughts. Brist thought
that she should mind, but honestly couldn’t think of a reason to
protest the idea. In fact, if she were in this time period long
enough, she just might have to suggest the idea to the gorgeous man
herself. Only, instead of the cumbersome petticoats, she would have
to wear nothing but the lingerie that she had in her bag.
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